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:iconthex-plotion:
Ahh...page two... of the story i made up on the spot x3...

and omg there\'s no space for the dialogue O.O....

Dialouge:

Rainbow Dash: Whoa!! What was that?!

Pinkie Pie: I think it was Queen

Rainbow Dash: No, not that. We better check on that odd flash--

Pinkie Pie: \"AAAAAAH!!! King of the IMPOSSIBLE\"

*in the house*

Rainbow Dash: Hey Twilight? Everything ok in there?

Twilight: Ugggh...My head....

Rainbow Dash: Oh my Gosh!! Twilight are you hurt? what's goin' on here? Come on say somethi--

*a glow fills the room as the dark figure stands before them*

Twilight & Dash: EEEEEP!!--






(Pinkie Pie: hey..are we in a comic?)



well this is as much as i can come up with so far XD

what will happen next?


I dunno..but hopefully i remember to leave space for the dialogue XD




MLP (c) Hasbro
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:iconphoenixacezero:
Gigeu from earthbound.
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:iconwatcher25:
oh well this can only end well....




not.... (down face, not crying) T_T
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:iconds2096:
Panel 6, left to right: Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, and Jason from Home Movies.
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:iconpuppyakamaru:
!PuppyAkamaru May 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XDDDD i love the second to last panel!! THOSE FACES! And i also lover that creature thing!! It's so sexy
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:iconthex-plotion:
Sexy? o_o...him?
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:iconpuppyakamaru:
!PuppyAkamaru May 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
YUS.
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:iconevilrabbit123:
Comic design is never easy. To place all things in dynamic order while giving enough room for characters and dialogue and choosing the right angels is harder to do than most people think. :nod:

And I think you did a really good job with it. :clap:

Everything is well on its place. The page is easy to read and well drawn and colored. All poses work well and characters look and act like they should. :D

All in all you did a good job with this. You get additional points for Pinkie Pie's expression and H.P. Lovercraftesque name for the comic. :thumbsup:

I fave! :iconplusfav:
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